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SunRise2

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Image size
2478x1918px 697.76 KB
Make
Hewlett-Packard
Model
Photosmart M425
Shutter Speed
1/134 second
Aperture
F/4.8
Focal Length
18 mm
ISO Speed
159
Date Taken
Feb 14, 2008, 12:53:17 PM
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bluem00n's avatar
You posted around four images on this thread: [link] so I'm just letting you know I'm commenting on this one but I'm referring to all your images :)

First and foremost, your images are washed out. You should look up tutorials about digital darkroom or how to post-process images using photoshop.
(what I'm saying is your images need more contrast, basically).

Another thing is your compositions - they seem like snapshots, not real photographs. What I mean by this is that you have objects that distract the viewer from fully enjoying the images (in this case the electric lines) and the images do not seem like you've put much thought into them before you took them. If you aren't familiar with rule of thirds, you should look it up. It's breakable, but only when it's called for.
Otherwise: all the images you posted are just about the same. I haven't looked through your gallery (been rather busy lately :aww: ) but I hope you vary your subject more often.

Good luck :hug: